The feedback from this test shoot we discovered we need to make it more interesting and drag the idea more, and by doing this we will extend the amount of time in which the FBI agent will walk around the house to discover the intruder. Instead of her just walking down the hallway and turning to corner to find the intruder. This will intensify the tension which is created and lead on the viewer/audience more.
For our real shoot we will make the detective walk up the stairs and explore the area before she finds the intruder.
For this test shoot we were unable to film all the different shots, as it was all over the place and we were not really focusing on the shots, we were focusing more on the idea and what was happening. Therefore in some clips it does not match up with what has previously been shown or the actions don't match up with one another, for example:
Neave started off the clip by holding the 'gun' (innocent smoothie) with two hands and then the next clip she is holding it with one hand and her positioning of holding the gun is different in both clips.
Our idea is just under 2 minutes (1:43) but we are not overly worried about this because in this test shoot, we missed out multiple different sections and different shots which we had in mind that we would get for our real shoot. And the location has an impact on this as the house we will be filming our real shoot in is a large house with grand stairs and long hallways, whereas this is just one room with a table which we had to improvise as a hallway. So overall with all the missing sections and shots this should come up to just above 2 minuets.
The pace of this sequence could be improved as at some points it seemed as if she was just walking in a straight line for a long amount of time and nothing was happening and there was just a build-up, which could be a good thing but the way it was portrayed and shown was not a good thing and made it boring and dragged it on and made the sequence slow. For the real shoot this could be improved as we would portray her walking up the stairs, turning corners, looking behind or looking ahead and this will all add to the tension being created and make it more interesting for the viewer / audience.
When this is filmed properly and with time and caution and the right props, location and characters, this idea will make an engaging opening sequence and will look very good, once it is all put together. For this test shoot you can see the potential it has but as it was rushed, unorganised and not a lot of thought was put into it, you are able to tell from the final edited piece. From this we now are aware of what we need to do on the day of this shoot and also the editing that will need to be done. We need to be organised, take our time, plan well (which we have done), speak to our actors who will be playing the roles and make sure we have all the knowledge we learnt from the camera and editing workshops in our mind, which will only benefit us.








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