We met again as a production group and received feedback from Matt and Mike and we came to the conclusion that we should adapt the idea and this would consist of the female detective arriving at the house as the murder has just happened.
The detective arrives at the house and she is looking for the victim around the house and hears heavy breathing coming from the other room. The victim is on the floor clearly wounded and has been hurt - detective goes over to the victim and attempts to help her and calls for backup as the victim is visibly about to die. The victim struggles to breathe but then uses all her energy and says to the female detective "There still in the house". The female detective goes to reach her gun and slowly stands up. She goes around the house to find this murderer and she finds him and kills him without hesitation - as she finds him she speaks into the microphone "got the bastard". The clip then ends with the sound of police cars arriving. This completes the opening sequence as we are told the whole 'story' and its not like it ends on an unanswered question - the question is answered and we know this murderer is dead and this action is over.
We as a group are feeling very positive about this idea and pleased with how it may turn out.
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